This is exactly the feedback I'm looking for Elf, thanks very much!
definitely not a singer as you may have already guessed;-) I felt uncomfortable all the
way through recording the vocals and I think this is present in the track. I would love if
someone else would do the vocals but can't get anyone local and I've asked around online
and never had anyone get in touch. Would someone reading right now fancy having a go?
Kick drum is very aggressive the now and it was just a sample I thought was ok
for trying out an arrangement, will be looking to change most of the drum samples once I
have a final arrangement and make them more natural sounding. There are no transitions
either and it sounds a bit block like just now but these are things I tend to leave till
the end. Should I try it differently in future?
Which synth part do you think
is especially cheesy? It seems no matter what I try to write it always sounds a little
cheesy! :-) I really don't intend it to but the cheese magnet always catches me... Any
pointers or advice here?
EOTS is definitely on my influence list but with
this track I originally had a fatboy slim - brimful of asha vibe in my head and it somehow
How did the baby laughing at the end sound? This was my son laughing
for the first time when he was around 4 months old! He's now 18 months so that should give
you an indication of how long I've been working on it! Or how little time I actually get
now;-) I wrote this for him and hoped to have it done for his 1st birthday but obviously
it wasn't possible due to me lacking the voice of an angel!
I would love to
have someone else sing the vocals but if this is not to be, how could I turn it into an
Edit: I forgot to add, my sons first word was guitar! It took
me 2 weeks to get him to say it:-)
Edited by Paul Ledger (24/01/13 01:12 PM)