Nice tune! Mix has good clarity - vocals especially come across well. Couple of things -
Kick has a slight "pasted on" feeling - a bit overly prominent & dry - a little more
ambience & less "click" might seat it better in the mix (it could probably just plain
come down in volume a little too). Guitar is dull sounding - perhaps high pass filter it
a little more aggressively & roll out a little somewhere around 400hz & perhaps
boost it slightly around the 1-2.5k mark. Bass is getting overpowered by the kick at the
moment, but turning down the kick should balance things a little more. I see a few
opportunities to create a few "ear candy" moments - perhaps effecting the "ella - ella
etc." part of the tune somewhat heavily will help to seat it better in the mix - at the
moment is sounds a bit strange - so why not use it & make it sound totally weird?
Overall, a great start!
Edited by fHumble fHingaz (22/12/10 03:27 AM)