Forum - Main Forums : Production - Mixing, Mastering, Gear & Techniques

SOS Forum

Today's Active Topics · FORUM INDEX · Search Forum · Who's Online? · FAQs/Help · Calendar

Main Forums >> Production - Mixing, Mastering, Gear & Techniques

Print Thread

Pages: 1

Davedave93

Joined: 21/04/10
Posts: 110

opinions on this song please?
#927277 - 17/07/11 10:34 PM

Hello

Hope this is the right place to put this! The forum's been a little shaken up!

Here's a song of mine, would love to get some feedback on the mix/production, or even just the song itself!

http://soundcloud.com/daveabramsmusic/all-on-your-own

Dave

Post Extras:

Davedave93

Joined: 21/04/10
Posts: 110

Re: opinions on this song please? new

[Re: Davedave93]
#928211 - 19/07/11 11:43 AM

Anyone? Please?

Post Extras:

Neokoenig

Joined: 24/05/08
Posts: 273
Loc: Oxford

Re: opinions on this song please? new

[Re: Davedave93]
#928245 - 19/07/11 12:43 PM

A bit of pendantry:

The backing vocals at 0'53 sound flat to my ears.
The transistion at 2'23 sounds odd to me too.

Other than that, I enjoyed the track!

--------------------
Web Design ~
Drum Studio

Post Extras:

narcoman
active member

Joined: 14/08/01
Posts: 8469

Re: opinions on this song please? new

[Re: Davedave93]
#928322 - 19/07/11 03:16 PM

nice tune.

Think the production is a bit messy (and yes - I get the lo-fi approach BUT it's got such a clean sound! ). Good track but needs a bit of massaging in the mix....

Post Extras:

Phil O
active member

Joined: 03/09/03
Posts: 1398
Loc: Scotland

Re: opinions on this song please? new

[Re: Neokoenig]
#928328 - 19/07/11 03:26 PM

+1 For the comments from Neokoenig. The vox sound a bit flat generally in other sections too. Also a bit 'boxy' in parts though this could be due, in part, to the compression process.

The Caribbean vibe in the section towards the end doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the track.

Overall, I think it's a pleasant enough 'ditty' though may not attract a lot of attention given the recent (and possibly more distinct sounding) output from the likes of Mumford & Son. Indeed, there is a danger of being classed as a bandwagon jumper!!

My tuppence,

P

Post Extras:

Pages: 1

Extra Information
1 registered and 24 anonymous users are browsing this forum. Moderator: David Etheridge, James Perrett, zenguitar, Martin Walker, Hugh Robjohns, Zukan, Frank Eleveld, Will Betts	Forum Permissions You cannot start new topics You cannot reply to topics HTML is enabled UBBCode is enabled	Rating: Thread views: 2071