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Can you find any Flaws within my production in this track?

PostPosted: Sun Feb 19, 2017 7:53 pm
by HenyEnvy

Re: Can you find any Flaws within my production in this track?

PostPosted: Sun Feb 19, 2017 9:20 pm
by zenguitar
Probably better to post this in the Production forum for feedback. I'll move it there now,

Andy :beamup:

Re: Can you find any Flaws within my production in this track?

PostPosted: Tue Feb 21, 2017 1:56 pm
by HenyEnvy
Thanks Andy. Has it been moved though I can't seem to find the post anywhere else?

Re: Can you find any Flaws within my production in this track?

PostPosted: Wed Feb 22, 2017 4:45 pm
by Martin Walker
Hi HenyEnvy!

I think Andy was perhaps having a senior moment, as when I read this thread he'd replied but not actually 'moved' it.

I did so on his behalf, and it's now in our 'Mixing, Mastering & Post Production' forum.

However, I left the 'shadow' thread where it was - this handy feature available to we moderators means that while the thread itself gets moved to its desired destination, a 'shadow' of it remains where it was originally posted, so you don't have to search for the new location - just click on the thread title either in its original location or its 'moved' location and it will open exactly the same thread.

Does that make sense? :beamup:


Martin

Re: Can you find any Flaws within my production in this track?

PostPosted: Wed Feb 22, 2017 4:59 pm
by Martin Walker
Having said that, it's only fair that I also take the time to listen to your track and offer some comments, as that's what you've been waiting for after all :mrgreen:

First impressions are really good to my ears.

The mix is clear (all the separate elements have their own space, so you can hear them clearly and enjoy them all) and well balanced (there's a good amount of bass, mid and top end, although I might have added a little 'air' to a few of the top end sounds for some sparkle.)

Remarkably, all the vocals and rap parts are beautifully audible (more than can be said for many chart offerings) and I love their delay, pre-echo, stutter and reverb treatments - there's loads of interest here to keep the ears engaged throughout the track.

I don't like these sorts of very repetitive noise-based snare sounds, but that's just my opinion and nothing to do with your production :smirk:

You might have got a little more mileage out of 'dancing' percussive pan movements to occasionally make things jump out of the stereo mix to add more interest. Nevertheless, I'm still enjoying listening to this track after four listens, which is a very good sign.

Overall, I wouldn't personally say there were any faults with your production - let's see what others think ;)

Hope this helps!


Martin

Re: Can you find any Flaws within my production in this track?

PostPosted: Wed Feb 22, 2017 5:08 pm
by zenguitar
:headbang:

:beamup:

Re: Can you find any Flaws within my production in this track?

PostPosted: Wed Feb 22, 2017 8:51 pm
by HenyEnvy
Wow thank you Martin!

I really appreciate the time you spent into listening to all the details of the track. I see what you mean with the snare, I tend to get lazy while producing if I'm honest.

Yeah I think I could definitely pay more attention to the whole panning aspect of things too!

Again Thank you for your time, I will keep what you said in mind with my future productions!

Re: Can you find any Flaws within my production in this track?

PostPosted: Thu Feb 23, 2017 3:25 pm
by Martin Walker
A pleasure HenyEnvy! 8-)

Glad you found my comments useful , and looking forward to hearing your next project! 8-)


Martin