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I like the guitar sound ... the distorted vocal is an interesting element as a musical-ish noise but if there are any lyrics I can't tell what they are.
As far as I can tell there is only a guitar and a distorted vocal in the mix, which is difficult to judge as a mix other than to say 'guitar sound is nice, vocal is incomprehensible'. The distortion on the guitar is a tad too much for my taste as well.
Not that I don't like it as a concept, just I can't make head or tail of what the lyrics are and there's way to much distortion floating about in there overall.
The low-mids, low-end could do with some attention, but I suspect that's partly the over-use of distortion.
All meant in a positive spirit, it's good to hear people share their work and I commend you for doing so. As confirmed by Phratry
you can obviously play a stringed instrument or two well enough. I think apart from the overuse of distortion in the first track, the vocals could be clearer all round :)