RichardT wrote:For a first song this is very good.
RichardT wrote:One thing I found disconcerting was the long gap between the first and second lines of the lyric. That’s unusual. If it’s an effect you deliberately chose, then that’s fine, but it did leave me wondering when the next line was going to arrive.
Yes I did intend for there to be a slight pause between the first and second lines of the first verse It also occurs in the second verse, although I'm not sure if it's very noticeable at that point?