Beginner Acoustic Mix Critique

Hi everyone! Due to COVID, I have to figure out a YouTube or streaming solution to get some income as a musician. I'm really new to mixing and mastering though and was wondering if this is a good sound to aim for?
https://clyp.it/mndz4xp3
If not, please let me know how I can improve on it! Thanks and much appreciated!
https://clyp.it/mndz4xp3
If not, please let me know how I can improve on it! Thanks and much appreciated!